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'''Original #3''': The Internet should enrich the lives of individual human beings. | '''Original #3''': The Internet should enrich the lives of individual human beings. | ||
'''Proposed #3''': The Internet must enrich the lives of individual human beings. | '''Proposed #3''': The Internet must enrich the lives of individual human beings. | ||
'''Approved #4''': Individuals' security and privacy on the Internet are fundamental and cannot be treated as optional. | '''Approved #4''': Individuals' security and privacy on the Internet are fundamental and cannot be treated as optional. | ||
'''Alternate #4''': Individuals' security and privacy on the Internet are fundamental and must not be treated as optional. | '''Alternate #4''': Individuals' security and privacy on the Internet are fundamental and must not be treated as optional. | ||
'''Proposed #4''': Security and privacy on the Internet are fundamental and must not be treated as optional. | '''Proposed #4''': Security and privacy on the Internet are fundamental and must not be treated as optional. | ||
===Removal of commas=== | ===Removal of commas=== | ||
Removing commas can make the text crisper and in some cases make the meaning clearer. | Removing commas can make the text crisper and in some cases make the meaning clearer. | ||