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'''Rationale''': Removing commas can make the text crisper and in some cases make the meaning clearer. | '''Rationale''': Removing commas can make the text crisper and in some cases make the meaning clearer. In #8, a comma is removed for consistency with the other principles. | ||
'''Approved #5''': Individuals must have the ability to shape the Internet, and their own experiences on it. | '''Approved #5''': Individuals must have the ability to shape the Internet, and their own experiences on it. | ||
'''Proposed #5''': Individuals must have the ability to shape the Internet and their own experiences on it. | '''Proposed #5''': Individuals must have the ability to shape the Internet and their own experiences on it. | ||
'''Original #8''': Transparent community-based processes promote participation, accountability, and trust. | |||
'''Proposed #8''': Transparent community-based processes promote participation, accountability and trust. | |||
'''Original #10''': Magnifying the public benefit aspects of the Internet is an important goal, worthy of time, attention and commitment. | '''Original #10''': Magnifying the public benefit aspects of the Internet is an important goal, worthy of time, attention and commitment. | ||
'''Proposed #10''': Magnifying the public benefit aspects of the Internet is an important goal worthy of time, attention and commitment. | '''Proposed #10''': Magnifying the public benefit aspects of the Internet is an important goal worthy of time, attention and commitment. | ||