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19 November 2013
6 November 2013
→Comma Removal #10
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→Comma Removal #8
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→Change 'goals' to 'profit'
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→Consistent Use of "Must" and "Must Not"
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→Removal of 'Individuals'
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→Shorten Principle #9
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→Shorten Principle #6
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→Shorten Principle #1
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9 October 2013
8 October 2013
no edit summary
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→Shortened Versions: change will to may
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→Text Change Proposals Unrelated to Shortening: clarification in rationale
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→What Changes Are Not Part of This Comparison: remove some extra comments from the rationale. Add the word "rationale"
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→Remove Words: consistency of using the words "removal" instead of remove
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→Removal of commas: add #8
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→Removal of commas: add the word "rationale"
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→Text Change Proposals Unrelated to Shortening: add the word "rationale"
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→Shortened Versions: add a clarification sentence and the word "rationale"
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→Versions for Languages Where Further Shortening May Be Needed
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→Remove Words: add more clarification to rationale.
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→Remove Words: add more clarification to rationale.
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→What Changes Are Not Part of This Comparison: clarify wording
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→What Changes Are Not Part of This Comparison: add a spae
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→Versions for Languages Where Further Shortening May Be Needed: add bold
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→Remove Words: add spaces
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→Consistent use of the words "must" and "must not": add spaces
m→Removal of commas: add spaces
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→Removal of commas
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→Versions for Languages Where Further Shortening May Be Needed
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→Versions for Languages Where Further Shortening May Be Needed: add a note
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change a heading size
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add a comparison of the proposed changes
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